CYB3R

CYB3R

Thursday 5 March 2015

Feedback: More Improvements

Feedback
We've received more feedback from our teacher in order
to improve our film before the deadline.

1. Sort out distribution ident.
2. first titles wouldn't be on the screen already.
3. Locker shot - grainy & poor framing.
4. Sort out titles - wrong order & too many names listed for
each role (don't use one name more than once).
5. Titles (read backwards) enter screen from left
not right.
6. Re-shoot board with significant posters.
7. Re-edit typing sequences so they're split screened.
8. End the opening - could have better shot 
to complete. 

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