Reviews: Footage, Comments about Framing, Lighting, Shot types & Use of props.

After watching the rough cut we received feedback/reviews, here are the improvements we need to make ..

improvements :

- We plan to change the location to the lunch hall because in the lunch hall they can be more relaxed, act upon their stereotype more and and you can clearly see their mise-en-scene.

- Bring in more props for mise-en-scene 

e.g. shopping bags, sketch books paintbrushes, footballs.

- Think about our lighting and surroundings. 

- Consider the orders in which we are doing things. 

- More extreme close ups and different shots for match cuts. 

- Use tripod. 

- Take out two cameras so that we can shoot different scenes and angles at one time.

- Make sure the camera is focused. 

- Make sure the tripod is levelled. 

feedback :

- Plan better shots for a variety of shot types.

- Mise-en-scene in the back ground; such as anti-bullying posters.

- Our costumes were good as it expressed the character's role and (stereotype) however, our props needed to be improved to emphasise the location/setting.

- Get better lighting as some scenes it was difficult to see what was occurring within the scene due to the dark lighting.

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