Production: Signing Off

Today, March 5th, we finished our rough cut 4 and final film opening. We signed off on the sign out sheet to let our teacher know that we have finished with our coursework 

Filming: Re-filming after feedback

Re-filming after feed back.

We decided to re-film our locker scene as the feed back we received was that our locker scene was to dark and it was at a bad angle. 

Here are some pictures from our re-filming today, there has been improvements made for instance the lighting. Before the locker scene was extremely dark and it was difficult to see what was in the scene, however this time we used a top light to capture more light into the scenes. It made a big difference as the

viewers can finally see the drawings on the lockers that will symbolise the different social group stereotypes. 

Also, we added more use of mies-en-scene within the lockers to emphasise the character's personalities and to make the locker scene significant. For example, we placed jock/varsity jackets inside the jock's locker and a handbag and ballet shoes for the princess's locker. 

Planning: Adjusting Title Credits on Motion

Titles credits on Motion

As our teacher gave us feedback stating - our

title credits were read backwards as they entered left when it

should enter the frame from the right side, as we need

to see their role & name first before their sure name.

Here is a gif of how I fixed the title credits on motion, by changing the positioning from right not left.

Production: Re-writing The Nerd's Blog Post

Our teacher commented on The Nerd's blog post. She wanted to make sure that the blog fully described the students in the classroom

Production: Rough Cut 4 Feedback

Feedback: More Improvements

Feedback

We've received more feedback from our teacher in order

to improve our film before the deadline.

1. Sort out distribution ident.

2. first titles wouldn't be on the screen already.

3. Locker shot - grainy & poor framing.

4. Sort out titles - wrong order & too many names listed for

each role (don't use one name more than once).

5. Titles (read backwards) enter screen from left

not right.

6. Re-shoot board with significant posters.

7. Re-edit typing sequences so they're split screened.

8. End the opening - could have better shot 

to complete. 

Rough Cut 4 with sound